When it was my Birthday we went to King Wa's for dinner and it was so amazing I went up to get me pork with garlic bread and chips and I got me a raspberry drink with ice cream on the side and some oysters.
Every other kid that was there just got chips with sauce also some fish and that was it.
When we finished the next day we went to laser tag with some cousins and it was so terrifying that I all I did was hide and when someone came by me I blasted them all the way back to last week.
After when we finished we did nothing and just went to sleep because all of us were way tired so we did nothing else.
Hi my name is Ngarui and I like what you done on your birthday i wish i done that
ReplyDeleteIt sounds like you had an outstanding birthday! Yummy kai and laser tag... perfect! I like that you have organised your events in sequence, but maybe next time you could focus on one moment in time and describe your senses in more detail. At King Wa, what could you see, feel, hear, smell, taste? Use adjectives to describe in more detail.
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