The Birthday
This Thursday we had a little thing at School.
It was named Fun run a little bit like cross country but fun.
Everyday I was getting hopped up ruining around my house waiting for the right day to come to me.After a while it was here the Fun run day on Thursday but sadly it got cancelled due to bad weather and we had to wait until Monday.
Now it was time My body filled with adrenaline just after I woke up but then again I had to go to a birthday of my cousin. I left with my Mother in our car to go to Moerewa.
At first sight the house looked amazing there were decorations on every side of the walls,on the doors and in the windows.
We went in greeted everyone and sang happy birthday to my cousin after we jumped on the massive trampoline and danced to the beat inside then we ate cake and smacked a pinata.
It was so fun and joyful for hours then we had to leave because the birthday had come to a end.At home I was looking through my mums phone looking through the videos then went to bed.
All night I was just thinking about how fun the day was and eventually drifted of to sleep.
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Kia ora Braxton my name is Shay. I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I like the way you have used difficult words in your sentences. I've never done the fun run before but I would really love to do it next year. I’m just wondering if did you loved the fun run and your friends birthday party? Keep up the good work Braxton.
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