On the Water's Edge

Hello and welcome to my writing named On the Water's Edge. We were learning to write an piece of writing from a moment in time, we lately went to Ruakaka beach and that's what I wrote about. I found it pretty easy because I just love writing I know what most, verbs similes and onomatopoeia. Next time I will make sure that my writing will paint a bigger picture in the reader's mind.

My Writing

Hello and welcome to my writing. My writing was about why we need to conserve water. My task was to find out series of information about why we need to save water. Then I put on a piece of drawing and posted it here. I found it really easy because I love writing and getting the information was lightwork. I learnt about what a drought was and what we could do to save water. Next time I will make sure I have good ideas and more intense words.

My encounter with an entitled kid.

Everyday on Monday we do free writing this is what I wrote about 

Hello there this story is about one that I do not normally post on my blog but down my street I ran into an entitled kid.

This person we will call Jamie was a bully he picked on people that were smaller than him but never picked on those who were bigger than him.

Also if he would have asked you something like can I play with one of your toys and you said no he would beg or call you names.

This afternoon he was bullying one of the little kids because he didn't get a toy from him so I invited the bullied kid over my house and we played Fortnite but it did not end there he never left the outside of my house and said "let me in you did the same for him why not me?" I had had enough I was going to go out there and ruin him but my dad had already done it.Me and the kid carried on and were happy the kid had to go and I went to sleep after dinner.