On Mondays we write about anything we wan't and today I am going to write about me playing at my cousins.
On the weekends I went over to my cousins house
his name is Tray John and his brother's name is Hayden.
My mum and I went over there on Sunday because they invited us over for breakfast and we thought that was nice so we left to go eat a big feed of fish and chips.When we arrived I was so happy to play outside with my family that I have not seen in a while because it was fun and cool.
We even got to ride on the motorbike after our feed until the gas ran out and when it did we just shot each other with Nerf guns.
Later in the afternoon we had to leave because I had school and it was getting late so we left to home and to bed anyway my cousins were getting pretty mean.
kia ora Braxton my name is Zane and I am a year 6 student from Paihia School. I really liked your writing about what you did in the weekend with your cousin. I Thought that it was really interesting and cool.I really liked the part where you got to ride a motorcycle because it reminded me when i rode a motorcycle.i really fun time.I think that next time you could add more details and puncations so more people would want to read your writing.Did you had a fun time at your cousin house?
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