The Holidays.[Do not continue if you don't want to hear spoilers for the new lion king]
On Mondays we write about anything we wan't and today I choose to write about my holiday.
In the Holidays my mum and dad asked me if I wanted to see the new lion king it was really cool the story was exactly the same but the graphics and animals were different it wasn't cartoons anymore it looked real.
After that we left to this place in Paihia named King Wa which is a place were either you can have them cook for you or just eat all you can which is weird I would say but I love it to.
In the end we left to go home slept and relax or play the Xbox and be total bully's to each other while losing.
Nice to see a little warning at the start of your writing, lucky you didn't actually spoil it as I didn't get to watch The Lion King... even though I really wanted to! Glad to hear it was good though. Maybe next time you could try to add some detail about your senses... what do you see, hear, feel, smell, taste? There is so much you could write about at the movies :)
ReplyDeleteKia ora Braxton my name is Jahrell and I am a year 6 at Paihia School, I like your blog post about your holiday and watching the Lion King movie because I found the Lion king movie amazing. I liked the Lion king movie amazing because the graphics were much better then the cartoon version. Did you like the Lion king movie?
ReplyDeleteYour Sincerely Jahrell.