My nan
Every Monday we do something called free writing today I'm gonna make a poem about my sick Nan.
My Nan.
She is sick.
She is caring.
She loves to watch me work.
She likes to help others.
She gets me to school.
She is getting sicker and sicker.
She loves me very much.
She would hate it if you didn't listen to her.
She loves watching me play games.
She would never hurt someone.
By Braxton-lee
Nawww that is no good to hear. I hope she will get better quickly, Nans are such important people in our lives. It is nice that you wrote a poem about her. Maybe next time you could try different sentence starters or adding some 'sticky' language (awesome adjectives, verbs etc)
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