A poem about my mum.
On Monday we can do some free writing we get to write about anything we want so I choose a poem about my lovely mum.
My mum.
She is old.
She likes to swim.
She has a job.
She is caring.
She has a Xbox.
She loves daddy.
She loves me.
She plays Fortnite.
She is my mum.
And I love her.
By Braxton-lee.
Your mum plays Fortnite? What a choice mum!! She sounds amazing Braxton. Maybe next time add a few adjectives to help get a picture in the reader's mind.
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