Hello Braxton im Eben from Yaldhurst model school you are really good at describing the scene and what happened.You brought me back to when I when I had to get xrays on my leg.How come you didn't say what happened.
Hey Braxton, my name is Jedi and I am a year seven at YMS. That sounds really scary, what happened? Is this the first time it's happened?
Braxton you are a great author, the way you described the scene in just a few sentences. And you really catch the reader's attention. Maybe you might become an author when you grow up.
I there my name is Liam and I go to yaldhurst school. I find it very sad what happened to you. How did it happen. mabey next time you could put a little bit more writting but it is so sad what happened to you bye now.
Hello Braxton im Eben from Yaldhurst model school
ReplyDeleteyou are really good at describing the scene and what happened.You brought me back to when I when I had to get xrays on my leg.How come you didn't say what happened.
Because we had a few seconds until kapa haka
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ReplyDeleteHey Braxton, my name is Jedi and I am a year seven at YMS.
That sounds really scary, what happened? Is this the first time it's happened?
Braxton you are a great author, the way you described the scene in just a few sentences. And you really catch the reader's attention. Maybe you might become an author when you grow up.
Great job!
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I there my name is Liam and I go to yaldhurst school. I find it very sad what happened to you. How did it happen. mabey next time you could put a little bit more writting but it is so sad what happened to you bye now.
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